Ed de Moel

Child Ballads - End-Notes

216. The Mother's Malison,
or,
Clyde's Water

A.  Not divided into stanzas in the Manuscript; some times not into verses.
153. For is written after call in the preceding line.
163. But ay is written after agen in the preceding line.
164. He is written after crayed in the preceding line.
182. Till is written after in in the preceding line.
19. Ther was na mare seen of
that guid lord bat his hat
frae his head t her was na
mare seen of that lady bat
her comb an her sneed.
201. Doun stands at the beginning of the next line.
A 14-16 might perhaps be better put after the drowning, as in C.
B.  Readings inserted by Motherwell in a, copy of his Minstrelsy.
43,4. My malison and deidly curse
      Shall bear ye companie.
After 7:
He swam high, and he swam low,
      And he swam to and fro,
Until he gript a hazel-bush,
      That brung him to the brow.
94. Var. But his mother answered him.
10. O rise, rise, May Marget, h[e says], (cut away by the binder)
      O rise and let me in,
For the very steed that I came on
      Does tremble at every limb.
113. mither and father 's baith awauk.
12. O hae ye neer a stable, he says,
      Or hae ye neer a barn,
Or hae ye neer a wild-guse house,
      Where I might rest till morn?
141. My barn is.
142. My stable is.
143. The house is fu o wild, wild gees.
144. They canna be moved.
154. Rides in my companie.
161. his milk-white.
162. And who could ride like him.
164. 'T was far outowre the brim.
After 16:
He swam high, and he swam low,
      And he swam to and fro,
But he neer could spy the hazel-bush
      That would bring him to the brow.
Comment: The mother was a witch; made responses for Margaret; met him in a green habit on his return home. He inquired for the ford; she directed him to the deepest linn. When he got into the water, two hounds seized on his horse, and left him to struggle with the current.
Willie's mother had transferred herself to Margaret's house according to the variation in 94; so she is the witch.
All this is very paltry. The mother's curse was enough to drown Willie without her bestirring herself further.

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